Junior Limerick Section for young 'uns & Learners!

[pete9012S]

Calling all young limerick posters-post all your limericks here and take as much time as you like.....

Practise the art of limerick writing,make as many mistakes as you like without any fear of polite correction or need to worry if you have posted something incorrect whilst you learn how limericks work!!

Keep at it,with lots of practise here together you will soon get the hang of it!!


Starter;

There once was a young limerick writer

[elizabeth]

Thanks,a lot.Pete
Starter;

There once was a young limerick writer
Who used to make the limerick lighter

[pete9012S]

There once was a young limerick writer
Who used to make the limerick lighter
but then one bright day,

[elizabeth]

There once was a young limerick writer
Who used to make the limerick lighter
but then one bright day,
she heard someone say

[ria ann]

Thanks for creating this for us,Pete. It will help us to practise on our limericks

[ria ann]

There once was a young limerick writer
Who used to make the limerick lighter
but then one bright day,
she heard someone say
That he had gone to become a fire fighter.

Is anything wrong with my line?If so please tell me because I would like to improve my limerick skills

[ria ann]

As no one has objected ,I am starting a new limerick but if there is any problem please tell me.

Limericks are fun to write

[Moonraker]

Limericks are fun to write
As is a cherry to bite

[Daisy]

There once was a young limerick writer
Who used to make the limerick lighter
but then one bright day,
she heard someone say
That he had gone to become a fire fighter.

Is anything wrong with my line?If so please tell me because I would like to improve my limerick skills

That's a very good last line ria ann (much better than Nigel's attempt I have to say!) Come on Nigel, don't confuse them - you know your line is too short!

[ria ann]

Thanks Daisy.
Even I thought that Moonraker's line was a bit short but I didn't want to say anything because I had already made so many mistakes .

[elizabeth]

You're right,Ria.So are we including Nigel's line or can we add something else there?

[ria ann]

What about changing it a little bit.

Limericks are fun to write
As is a sweet cherry to bite

Is this ok everybody or should we make a different line?

[Moonraker]

I was just pulling your leg (as Daisy well knows!), so please ignore me and do whatever you like! I still enjoy reading your limericks, girls, even if they are sometimes rubbish!!!

[elizabeth]

How dare you call it rubbish? Don't worry,Nigel.Tee Hee Hee .Just joking.

[ria ann]

I still enjoy reading your limericks, girls, even if they are sometimes rubbish!!!

Thanks Nigel