Can We Do a Limerick Together???
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
When Lady Gaga caught first sight of Goon,
His manly figure and looks made her swoon,
Then he sang her a song,
Though the tune was all wrong,
I changed the "The" in the 3rd line to "Then", as I believe that is what was intended.
His manly figure and looks made her swoon,
Then he sang her a song,
Though the tune was all wrong,
I changed the "The" in the 3rd line to "Then", as I believe that is what was intended.
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
When Lady Gaga caught first sight of Goon,
His manly figure and looks made her swoon,
Then he sang her a song,
Though the tune was all wrong,
So she thought, "he is sure NOT a boon!"
His manly figure and looks made her swoon,
Then he sang her a song,
Though the tune was all wrong,
So she thought, "he is sure NOT a boon!"
'Tis loving and giving that makes life worth living.
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
I was really stuck with a last line and tried but failed to come up with one...well done, Daisy!
All I could think of was 'so she thought, 'who's this tuneless baboon?'
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
Thanks Rob... I think yours is equally good.
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
I always think of last lines after someone posts one, lol!
Here's a starter -
Once, Goon, dressed as old Santa Claus,
Here's a starter -
Once, Goon, dressed as old Santa Claus,
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Once, Goon, dressed as old Santa Claus,
One dark night, caused our Fatty to pause.
One dark night, caused our Fatty to pause.
'Tis loving and giving that makes life worth living.
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
Once, Goon, dressed as old Santa Claus,
One dark night, caused our Fatty to pause.
Calling out, "Ho, ho ho!"
One dark night, caused our Fatty to pause.
Calling out, "Ho, ho ho!"
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Once, Goon, dressed as old Santa Claus,
One dark night, caused our Fatty to pause.
Calling out, "Ho, ho ho!"
Poor Goon slipped in the snow,
One dark night, caused our Fatty to pause.
Calling out, "Ho, ho ho!"
Poor Goon slipped in the snow,
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Once, Goon, dressed as old Santa Claus,
One dark night, caused our Fatty to pause.
Calling out, "Ho, ho ho!"
Poor Goon slipped in the snow,
To a round of excited applause!
One dark night, caused our Fatty to pause.
Calling out, "Ho, ho ho!"
Poor Goon slipped in the snow,
To a round of excited applause!
'Tis loving and giving that makes life worth living.
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
Another starter:
When Buster went out in the rain,
When Buster went out in the rain,
'Tis loving and giving that makes life worth living.
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
When Buster went out in the rain,
He wandered without any gain,
He wandered without any gain,
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
When Buster went out in the rain,
He wandered without any gain,
Till Goon he espied
He wandered without any gain,
Till Goon he espied
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It was a nuisance. An adventure was one thing - but an adventure without anything to eat was quite another thing. That wouldn't do at all. (The Valley of Adventure)
It was a nuisance. An adventure was one thing - but an adventure without anything to eat was quite another thing. That wouldn't do at all. (The Valley of Adventure)
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When Buster went out in the rain,
He wandered without any gain,
Till Goon he espied
And his teeth he applied
He wandered without any gain,
Till Goon he espied
And his teeth he applied
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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When Buster went out in the rain,
He wandered without any gain,
Till Goon he espied
And his teeth he applied
But Goon's trousers took most of the strain.
He wandered without any gain,
Till Goon he espied
And his teeth he applied
But Goon's trousers took most of the strain.
'Tis loving and giving that makes life worth living.
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Re: Can We Do a Limerick Together???
I bet Goon's trousers all had bites around the bottoms!
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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