Write a story!

[Ming]

Go Ahead!

[elizabeth]

I would also like to join you in your story.It is similar to Five Findouters And The Dog Mystery By You.....but this is more easy.Both are nice but that after sometime becomes muddling.So,please write the story.Waiting for it.

[ria ann]

It will be fun to write the story.Are you going to start it enidfan?

[Timmylover]

EnidFan hasn't posted on the forums for over a year, Elizabeth and Ria Ann. You may have to start your own story.

[ria ann]

I just noticed that. I am not good at starting stories it is much easier for me if someone has started it and I only have to continue.

[elizabeth]

Ok then.I am starting one.

THE MYSTERY OF THE MISSING GIRL

It was a right,sunny Sunday morning.Bets woke up.She dressed and went to breakfast.

She said : Good Morning Daddy.Good Morning Mummy.

Then she began to tuck in and she suddenly remembered that Fatty was coming that day.

She told Pip : Fatty is coming today.Eat fast.we have to go and Meet Larry and Daisy and also give old Buster a bath and take him with us.I bet Fatty will come in a new disguise.But we will spot him all right,won't we?

Pip said : I nearly forgot.Yes,let's eat fast.Old Buster will be waiting for us.

They began to gobble their food especially Bets.She was so excited.Her beloved Fatty was coming.She suddenly choked and Pip had to clap her on her back to make her normal.

Mrs Hilton said : Bets and Pip,eat slowly.I won't have this behaviour in the dining table.

[Icecream342]

They just ignored this comment and ate quickly. Then, Ding dong.
" It's fatty" quick

[Icecream342]

They just ignored this comment and ate quickly. Then, Ding dong.
" It's fatty" quick

Can't thnk of anything else, anyone else

[Daisy]

"Bet!" said Mrs Hilton in a very stern voice. "If you can't behave properly at the table I shall have to make you stay here when the others go out together. Pip, go and tell Frederick that Bets is not able to join you today!"
Bets sat back in her chair. Her eyes filled with tears. "Oh mother!" she said. "I'm sorry. I'll finish my breakfast slowly. Please don't keep me from going out with the others!"

[ria ann]

"Ok ,but if you don't behave properly again I won't leave you "said Mrs Hilton in a stern voice.

So poor Bets ate her breakfast slowly, thinking of Fatty all the time.

[elizabeth]

Pip comforted her.

[ria ann]

"Look Bets,mother has gone.Eat fast we mustn't be late",said Pip.

So Bets gobbled up her food and got ready to go.

[elizabeth]

They quickly put on their coats and hats and rushed through the door,down the lane to Fatty's house to see Mrs Trotteville in the garden.They greeted her politely and asked her where Buster was.They found him in the kitchen sniffing at the larder with Cook scolding him.when Buster saw them he began wagging his tail nineteen to the dozen and barking happily.They gave him a bath and Bets bathed him in a tub and put soap on his body.The amazing thing was that he closed his eyes when she put soap on his face.Bets thought how clever of him.

Then they brushed his hairs and Pip teased Bets by saying : Now next,you will put a bow on his head and tail and say to Fatty when he arrives I bathed Buster.Fatty,did you like him?

Bets was angry and said : Don't be ridiculous,I will do nothing of that sort.But when Fatty comes,Buster should be neat.

[elizabeth]

"ok,ok,I was just teasing you",said Pip

So they went to meet Larry and Daisy who were just coming down the lane on the way to meet them.Buster licked both of them and wagged his tail ninteen to the dozen.

Pip looked at his watch and said,"Hurry up,or else we will be late".
So they rushed to wards the station to see the train just arriving.

Larry said,"Whew,we arrived just in time.Do you think Fatty will be in one of his disguises? If so,we will try to spot him and if we can't find him,we will leave Buster to the job."

[Farwa]

What happened to this story? I was just starting to get hooked!