New Weekly Serial

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That's despicable, what that bloke did. :evil: :evil: :evil: Poor Julie.
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I wouldn't mind being on that train to Paignton, Julie. :D
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Put yourself there, John, I'm sure Snubby will make room for you. :lol:
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Another good chapter, Julie! I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next, which is always a good sign! I was quite surprised they were holidaying near to real-life places, though, as that doesn't often happen in Enid Blyton books! :-D

Also interesting to have both Miss Pepper and Mrs Tickle in charge of proceedings! I'm sure the two will come to blows, lol! :lol: 8)
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An excellent second chapter, Julie. :D
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I was quite surprised they were holidaying near to real-life places, though, as that doesn't often happen in Enid Blyton books!
I rather like that. We could almost do with a map, Malcolm Saville/Lone Pine style! :D
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Rob Houghton wrote:Another good chapter, Julie! I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next, which is always a good sign! I was quite surprised they were holidaying near to real-life places, though, as that doesn't often happen in Enid Blyton books! :-D
Maybe not, Rob, but the story is mine, I'm only using Enid's characters. :D

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That's quite true, and I didn't mean it as a criticism. :-D I'm usually too lazy to use real-life places in my stories...saves me having to describe them accurately, lol! ;-)
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An excellent second chapter Julie. :D Can't wait to read more!!
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Thanks, Machupicchu14. :D

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How many chapters has The Rook's Rock Mystery got, Julie?
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It finishes on April 10th Eddie..... if you have a next year's calendar it might be possible to work it out. :wink:
(Asking Julie is easier though.)
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It has 26 chapters, Eddie. :)

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A good long one Julie... that's great.
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If you stretched it out to one chapter per fortnight, Julie — like Enid's original magazine serials — it would last a whole year. :wink:
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