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I've just read the last 2 chapters.... I'm really enjoying it very much. There really are some compensations for time zipping by at an alarming rate as one gets older. It won't seem very long before next Monday comes.
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It really is hard to believe that a week used to feel as if it had ten days, but now it feels more like two!
Really pleased you are enjoying my story, Daisy - I wish there was a way of being able to tell how many people are reading it, lol!
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Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Well, I'm reading it as well, and I nearly can't wait for next Monday to see how this goes on. All 4 children will have a shock in the next chapter. I really want to know what happens in the next chapter and how the girls deal with it.
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That's great! Thank you, Dinah! I'm pleased you're wanting to know how things work out! In this book I've tried to give the girls a chance to prove themselves a bit without the boys!
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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I've noticed that, too!Daisy wrote:...There really are some compensations for time zipping by at an alarming rate as one gets older.
Sometimes i wish I could click the stop button in order to make more time.
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Thanks Rob, I'm looking forward to see how the girls deal with what is coming their way. I'm also curious if the girls will meet (or at least see) the gypsys and how this goes on. That is really a different twist, I thought something would happen during the day that comes not during the night.
While time is quicker looking back, when looking forward and wanting to know something, time still is longer than I wish it is...
While time is quicker looking back, when looking forward and wanting to know something, time still is longer than I wish it is...
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It will inevitably change at some point beyond the age of 50, Dinah.Dinah Cunningham wrote:While time is quicker looking back, when looking forward and wanting to know something, time still is longer than I wish it is...
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There's a 'deliberate mistake' in this weeks chapter...wonder how many will spot it!
I'm presuming that neither Tony or Anita noticed it when they were proof reading...
I'm presuming that neither Tony or Anita noticed it when they were proof reading...
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Are you meaning stalagmites hanging down from the ceiling, Rob. As they are the ones on the ground. Stalagtites are the ones that hang from the ceiling. Or is it you wrote 'smelled', where I would have put 'smelt'.
Great chapter regardless.
Great chapter regardless.
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Yes Julie, I was going to say that it really is time Rob knew the difference between stalagmites and stalagtites! Until I reached that point Rob, I thought perhaps your comment referred to George giving Anne a hug when Timmy was lying between them. Poor squashed Timmy, I thought!
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Yes - stalagmites is the answer! I even remember having this conversation with my dad when writing it, and telling him that stalactites grew down from the ceiling and stalagmites grew up - which he also knew - so I'm not sure how I made the mistake!
I think 'smelled and smelt' are both okay as past tenses of 'smell'. Not sure which one Enid used most.
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I think 'smelled and smelt' are both okay as past tenses of 'smell'. Not sure which one Enid used most.
Well done, Julie and Daisy - your prize is one free week at Malory Towers!
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Thanks Rob.. When did you move? I had a different address for you!
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I used to live in The Faraway tree.
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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I'm happy to see I got stalactites and stalagmites round the right way in this chapter!
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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